jaksmillie's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The (true) Great Gatsby]

not quite sure what this is.

you need to elaborate on what this is. I just guessed it was a book.

[Snipers]

It would be much better if...

you took a little more time to work on your art (graphics) and if you made it longer.

joshster456 responds:

ya i probably could, thanks i will

[Border Defense]

Cool Game

I find these games a bit boring because there is a lot of waiting involved, but it was very enjoyable.

[Newgrounds Rumble]

best game...

... on newgrounds. I have been playing this so long and noticed only two things that are wrong with it.
1. It needs for characters.
2. For salad fingers when you select him the select box is off a little bit.

[Balancer]

greatest game ever.

everyone try to beat my ultimate score on hard. All time 1st place about 11,500

[smiley shoot 'em up]

I didn't...

... particulary like it because for one whenever you changed the background your score was automatically reset. And the change background button was in a different position every single frame. And i would appreciate a little better graphics, good try though.

[Escape THE ZONE]

I enjoyed this...

... flash. It was different than games i normally see so i liked it.
stars:
one for effort
one for trying
one for scripting
three cause i liked it
adds up to = 6
suggestions:
a little better graphics, and some more varietys of music.

[ZK's Cursor Maze!]

I had only one...

... problem. The game was incredibly hard.
stars:
five cause i liked it
one for effort
two for scripting
adds up to = 8
suggestions:
The game was too hard, but i was able to beat it, so make it easier to pass. also whenever you hit a wall you go back to level one. Couldn't you just make it so you restart the level you are on.

Zeldakrazed7 responds:

i could... but i was too lazy to do that....

[Ink D'up]

you tried...

... but this flash didn't peak my interest.
stars:
one for trying
adds up to = 1
suggestions:
better graphics, and add music.

[Gravity Depravity]

i felt...

... like this was a good flash game.
stars:
one for working hard
one for scripting
one for determination
one for graphics (i liked the graphics style)
one for not being a boring game
adds up to = 5 + 2 = 7 stars
suggestions:
Instead of gradiented balls being the players, and objects for this flash game i would recommend making a spaceship, trying to gather supplies to get back to earth or something.